Formal letter: a complaint about a late, damaged delivery
You recently ordered a washing machine online. It arrived much later than promised, and it was damaged. Write a letter to the company's customer service manager.
In your letter:
- describe what happened
- explain the problems this has caused you
- say what you would like the company to do
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...
Model letter, 185 words:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about a washing machine I ordered from your website on 3 October (order number 58214), which arrived late and in poor condition.
When I placed the order, I was promised delivery within five working days. However, the machine did not arrive until 24 October, nearly three weeks later, and only after I had called your helpline four times. When the driver unpacked it, I found that the door was cracked and one of the feet was missing.
This has caused me considerable inconvenience. Because my old machine had already been taken away, my family has been without one for almost a month, and I have spent around £40 at a local launderette. I also had to take two afternoons off work to wait for deliveries that never came.
I would therefore like you to collect the damaged machine and replace it within the next week. I would also appreciate a refund of the delivery charge and the launderette costs, for which I can send receipts.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Daniel Rossi
Why it works
- The purpose is in the first sentence, together with the order date and number the company needs.
- One paragraph for each bullet point, in the same order as the task, so the examiner can tick them off.
- Specific details: dates, the number of calls, the £40 and the two afternoons make the complaint believable.
- "Dear Sir or Madam" goes with "Yours faithfully", because the writer doesn't know the reader's name.
- Firm but polite: "I would like you to" and "I would appreciate" ask clearly without being rude.